Six-word short stories
Ernest Hemingway, famous for his Spartan style,
is credited with this semi-famous six-word story: For sale: baby shoes, never
worn.
It’s a strong example of creative
compression, inviting reader participation to flesh out the story, which all
good fiction does.
Here are a few six-word shorts I came up with:
Life
Too young. Too busy. Too old.
Tragedy
Bought a gun. Sonny found it.
DMV Statistics
One more drink. Four more dead.
Cell Addiction
Drove and texted. Carved in stone.
Parting
Married happily. Money woes. Lawyers richer.
Golden years
Growing old. Looking back. Shoulda dids.
Panic
:-)) :-) :-o :-/ :-< !!!
Posture
Sat up straight. On a thumbtack.
Native America
Chargoggagoogmanchoggaggoggchaubunagungamaugg. White people came. Webster
Lake.
(The original Indian name for the lake, which is in Massachusetts near the Connecticut border is the longest place name in the United States.)
See if you can come up with a few shorts. It’s great practice for condensing. Most first drafts of any writing, fiction or non, can be cut down considerably, and always with beneficial effect.
Phil
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